The
Title Page.
Less is more!
All
you need is your title and your name. If you don't have an agent, then do
include your contact information in the lower LEFT hand corner. Place
"WGAw" flush right on the same line as "CONTACT:", which
should be just above your contact information. I ALWAYS
place a copyright notice at the very bottom. See my page on COPYRIGHT
for reasons why this is important. If you are submitting to a contest and they forbid any contact info on the title
page, then you should omit your name from the copyright notice.
Do not
place your
WGA registration nr., draft number (unless this is a work for hire in such case
you would want to put draft number and date), or other such superfluous
information on your title page. It smacks of amature. For all intensive purposes, when you send that spec
screenplay out to production companies or agents, it is
the first draft. It doesn't matter how
many times you may have rewritten the thing! SEE
A SAMPLE HERE.
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Card
Stock Covers.
I use card-stock covers that I
purchase from FEDEXKINKOS or OFFICE DEPOT. I prefer WHITE, but any light,
muted tone will also suffice as long as it's not too bright or too
dark. I buy them by the ream, with letterhead paper to match. It's much cheaper
this way. The cardstock cover should be a minimum of 80#. Please, do not use those hard, slick covers or college paper
covers. That's not how we do it. YOUR
COVER SHOULD BE BLANK. NO ARTWORK. NO WRITING. NO SCRIPT
TITLE. NOTHING.
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Length... and
other Basic Stuff.
Standard length for a
feature-length screenplay falls between 100-130 pages, with the preferred
length around 110 pages. A script that is too
light or too heavy will make a negative impression before it's even cracked.
Unless you're Steven Spielberg or James Cameron, try to stay within these
parameters. However, length does have some exceptions, relating to
genre. Comedies and horror generally run between 85 - 105
pages. No less, and usually not much more than that unless it's
cross-genre.
Courier (12-point,
10-pitch, non-proportional) is the industry standard font. Courier,
Courier New, and Courier Old are all acceptable. Make sure it's set at 12
points. Do not deviate from this!
It may look
pretty written in italics, but it's one sure way to get it tossed in the trash
or, if you're lucky, in that SASE you included with your submission.
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Some
Tricks of the Trade.
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SOUND
EFFECTS... Sound effects are written in
ALL CAPS but sometimes there's confusion between what constitutes a sound
effect and what constitutes dialog. For instance: Does Shelly scream or
SCREAM? Does the dog bark or BARK? One simple way to remember the answer
is to ask yourself if the source of the sound is ON-SCREEN. If
Shelly is on-screen when she screams, then it would not be capitalized. If
she SCREAMS from another room, then it would be capitalized. If the dog is
on-screen when it barks, then you wouldn't capitalize it. However, if the
dog BARKS outside, then you would. Get it?
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O.S.
- V.O. - O.C. ... These terms sometimes
confuse the writer. O.S
stands for off-screen or out-of shot and is used in
FEATURE FILM
writing
when the speaking character is talking but from another room or area of
the set that's not seen in the current shot. V.O.
stands for voice-over. Characters
in the scene usually can't hear the dialog because it's said mainly for
the audience's benefit. It's often used when someone is reflecting (to us)
about the past, or when a character is reading a letter (we may hear
whoever wrote the letter reading it to us aloud). O.C. stands for off-camera and is used in the
same circumstance as O.S. except only for television.
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PHONE
CONVERSATIONS... These
can be a real pain. When you cut back and forth between two
locations with scene headings, the flow of the story is interrupted.
One great way to get around this is to set up the first scene and when you
cut to the second location, you'll set this up too. As soon as you've
written your brief descript of the location, you'll want to add
(INTERCUT
PHONE SEQUENCE). Then carry on the conversation as you normally would if
both characters were talking face to face. When the conversation is over,
the character that's in the scene will dictate which location finishes
out the scene. Get it?
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WHEN
A CHARACTER SINGS A SONG... Under
the character name in dialog you'll want to "direct" the actor
by adding in the parenthetical (Sings). Then when you place the song lyrics in the dialog,
USE ALL CAPS and break the lines, if possible, where they break in the
lyrics.
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MONTAGE
OF SHOTS... these
scenes are very brief, usually do not include any dialog, and usually
center around a common theme. For instance, your characters may be
spending their time shopping at the mall. You want to show them with each
other purchasing various items at a couple different stores but you don't
want to set up each experience as an entirely different scene. Here's a
basic example:
BEGIN
SHOPPING MALL MONTAGE.
INT.
DEPARTMENT
STORE COSMETIC COUNTER.
A
professional applies Shelly's
makeup. Her mother's next.
FINE
DRESS SHOP.
Pearl
waits for Shelly outside the dressing room. Shelly appears in a
gorgeous Chanel gown.
MALL
CORRIDOR.
Pearl
and Shelly hurry toward the jewelry shop. They struggle with bags bursting with
purchases, all laughs. Then
continue with your next full scene heading.
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DO'S
AND DONT'S.
- DON'T write the name of your script on
its spine.
- DON'T use screw in fasteners to bind
your script.
- DON'T place your WGA registration
number on your script.
- DON'T put artwork on your cardstock
cover.
- DON'T make producers or agents sign
for your material.
- DON'T send screenplays, treatments, or
pitches unsolicited.
- DON'T use caps in narrative unless you
are using a sound effect, a shot tag, or introducing a SPEAKING
character for the first time.
- DON'T use caps in dialog unless it's
singing. If you must emphasize for clarity, underline it.
- DON'T micromanage the actors by
overusing parentheticals.
- DON'T include too much detail in the
set. The only detail should be that of theme and feel, or a
necessary element of the plot.
- DON'T number your scenes. Write
in master scenes only (unless your hired to do a rewrite and the
script is locked).
- DON'T print your script on an inkjet
printer. The text will run if it gets wet (like with the
producer's coffee).
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- DO place a copyright notice on the
bottom of your title page.
- DO register all pitches, synopsis,
treatments and screenplays (all drafts) with the WGAw.
- DO register your copyright of all
scripts, treatments, and pitches.
- DO keep a submission log of all
contacts in receipt of your screenplay, pitch, treatment or
synopsis. Note its disposition as well.
- DO hire a consultant if you are new to
screenwriting. It will shorten your learning curve
considerably and save you a lot of time.
- DO invest in a screenwriting program
if you are serious about the craft. Again, it will save you
time and money in the long run.
- DO get any proposed deal in writing...
always.
- DO cultivate your own contacts and
leads. You must be your own biggest agent.
- DO surround yourself with a support
group that simply cares, then surround yourself with a support group
that actually cares about the quality of your writing.
- DO research each project. You'll
write better.
- DO read scripts. Good ones and
bad ones.
- DO use a laser printer or copier to
print your scripts.
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